Product copy that raised average order value by 28% in six weeks
A Neapolitan accessories brand had strong visual branding but product descriptions that read like inventory lists. Size, material, color. Nothing about who the buyer was, what the piece signified, or why it was worth the price. We rewrote 80 product pages with copy structured around the specific buyer identity each piece appealed to. Average order value went from EUR 73 to EUR 93.40 within six weeks. The effect was most pronounced on items above EUR 150, where the old copy had been losing the conversion at the price anchor.